Comments i used for improvement

(N)=Negative (P)=Positive 

1- 

front cover:

- too much unused space. (N)

- Looks quite professional. (P)

contents:

- an image needs to be used, it is very plain even though there is some colour. (N)

- the layout is very clear to understand, there is no confusion. (P) 

2-

front cover:

- the colour and content is very feminine - limited. (N)

- it is an eye catching image. (P)

contents:

- it needs to be more interesting you could do this by adding more things to the page. (N)

- the colour scheme is good throughout. (P) 

3-

front cover:

- the main cover line is not clear enough. (N)

- Its colourful, linking with the image. (P)

contents:

- a completely different font has been used from the front page. (N) 

- it is very well set out, nothing overlaps or clashes. (P)